College Students’Living Condition

　　【范文】
　　Recently, the living condition of some college students is frequently referred to as “dwelling-narrowness”. In fact, this embarrassing situation is very serious that few of us can fail to meditate on the causes of it.

　　In the first place, it’s difficult for graduates to bear the high cost of life in big cities. Poor payment thus gives rise to bad living conditions. Next, college students are more ambitious. Many of them are eager to compete in big cities like Shanghai and Beijing, where talents are abundant and positions are limited. Refusing to go back hometown let them suffer in big cities, which indirectly make their situation worse.
Generally speaking, college students should be more qualified to better themselves and adjust their goals according to the reality.

　　首句交待背景，用無生命的名詞詞組(inanimate noun phrase)作主語并使用被動語態，文章更加客觀中立。第二句話使用單詞embarrassing，深入地挖掘了當今大學生生存狀況艱難與大學生十年寒窗之間令人無奈的矛盾。第三句話為承上啟下句，fail to do sth.表示沒能、不能做某事。文章第二部分闡釋了作者的個人看法。認為此社會現象的一個原因是大城市的高消費與大學生剛剛畢業收入相對較低之間產生的矛盾。第二個原因來自大學生對自身期許過高與大城市人才濟濟之間的矛盾。使用單詞ambitious，表示雄心勃勃。在形容人才濟濟時，使用abundant，表示充足的。此外，文章還指出個原因是直接原因，第二個原因是間接導致了大學生生存困境。

　　后一段給出了解決方法，better oneself指使某人自身更加，better此處作動詞講。

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