【范文】
　　Micro-blogging is no longer a strange word. More precisely, it has become part of our life.
　　As for me, many factors contribute to the widespread of Micro-blogging. First, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings at any time. Second, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By revealing their heartfelt emotions on the Micro-blogging, their friends may also know about their conditions and can offer in-time comfort.
　　However, Micro-blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information.
　　All in all, Micro-blogging provides us comfort and also inevitably some concerns. We should be careful while using it.

　　【點(diǎn)評(píng)】
　　段直接切入主題。首句在說明微博越來越流行時(shí)沒有用肯定句micro-blogging is more and more popular, 而是用否定句的方式“負(fù)負(fù)得正”。
從第二段開始闡釋流行的原因。Contribute to是固定詞組，表示為……作出貢獻(xiàn)，其對(duì)應(yīng)的名詞是contribution。個(gè)原因是微博方便人們?cè)谌魏螘r(shí)候表達(dá)他們當(dāng)時(shí)的感覺。這里通過“at any time”和“instant feeling”突出了微博和傳統(tǒng)博客的區(qū)別。第二個(gè)原因是微博可以減壓。此處release表示釋放，除了跟release pressure, release stress, 還可以跟release news。
　　第三段描述了微博的弊端，give away表示出賣，同義詞有betray。后一段是作者的對(duì)微博的態(tài)度，在充分肯定微博積極意義的同時(shí)提醒人們要謹(jǐn)慎使用微博。

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