【作文范文】
　　Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons.
　　On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.
　　In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development.
　　【點評】
　　首段提出主題，其中第二句為過渡句，引出下文；第二段提出三點同意的理由；后一段得出結論，與段首句呼應，其中第二句是解釋型的補充說明句。
　　范文首段提出許多人建議大學開設心理課程。作者同意這一建議，并分三點在第二段中敘述理由。首先，目前的學習以及將來的就業(yè)壓力需要開設心理課程。其次，教會學生如何調整在不同環(huán)境下的情緒。后，給學生介紹有利于其身心健康的好習慣。第三段總結呼應首段內容。
　　第二段點中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”，修飾兩個名詞詞組，對比鮮明，at the moment表示“現(xiàn)在”，in the future表示“將來”，open a door for…表示“開啟了……之門”；第二點中的regulate表示“調節(jié)，控制”；第三點中的conducive表示“有益于……的”，后接介詞to。

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