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Part I                        Writing
【范文】
Students’Evaluationof Their teachers
Nowadays，at the end of each semester，besides theroutine preparation for the coming exams，students have anotherthing to do :to fill out evaluation forms and evaluate their teachers．In some schools，this kind of evaluation hasbecome the sole and only way to judge the teachers’performance and teachingquality．
A lot of controversy over the effectiveness of such evaluationssprings up．There are people who applaud this kind of evaluation，saying that since students are the center of educational activities，their judgments about whether a teacher is competent or not are ofthe utmost importance．On the other hand，there are people who are strongly against it，believing an effective judgment involves many aspects；students，young as they are，may only evaluate the teachers according to their personal likes anddislikes．
In my opinion，the students’evaluation is an indispensable partof the teacher—evaluation，but should be deignedscientifically，and be combined with other evaluationcriteria such as the students’progress，the colleagues’commentsand the teachers’achievements in scientific research．etc．
【譯文】  
學(xué)生對教師的評估
如今，在學(xué)期末的時候，學(xué)生們除了要像往常一樣為即將到來的考試做準(zhǔn)備，還有另外一件事情要做：填寫評估表格，為他們的老師打分。在一些學(xué)校，這種評估已經(jīng)成為評價教師表現(xiàn)和教學(xué)質(zhì)量的一方式。對于這種評估方式的有效性有許多爭議。一些人支持這種方法，他們認(rèn)為既然學(xué)生是教學(xué)活動的中心，那么他們對于一個老師是否勝任的評價就是至關(guān)重要的；另一方面，還有一些人強(qiáng)烈反對這一做法。他們認(rèn)為有效的評估涉及許多方面；學(xué)生們的年齡都不大，因此很有可能僅憑個人好惡對教師進(jìn)行評判。在我看來，學(xué)生對教師的評價是教師評估不可或缺的一個方面，但是此類評估應(yīng)該經(jīng)過科學(xué)的設(shè)計，并與其他的評估標(biāo)準(zhǔn)相結(jié)合，比如：學(xué)生的進(jìn)步、同事的評價以及教師的科研成果等等。
【要點(diǎn)用法】
semester學(xué)期    applaud贊成，支持
routine慣常的    competent勝任的
fill out填寫    utmost importance極其重要
sole and only一的personal likes and dislikes個人好惡
controversy爭議   indispensable不可或缺的
spring up出現(xiàn)    criteria標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(復(fù)數(shù))
【句法點(diǎn)評】
1．Nowadays，at the end of each semester，besides the routine preparation for the coming exams，students have another thing to do：to fillout evaluation forms and evaluate their teachers．
besides…為插入語，表示“除了……”，使句式更為靈活。to fill out forms/a form的用法比較地道，表示“填寫表格”。
2．There are people who applaud this kind of evaluation，saying that…on the other hand，there are people who are strongly against it，believing．．．
用on the other hand區(qū)分截然不同的兩種觀點(diǎn)，邏輯分明。there arepeople who分別引出兩句，較為工整。saying和believing皆為現(xiàn)在分詞表示伴隨，增加了句式的難度。
3．…an effective judgment involves many aspects；students，young as they are，may only evaluate theteachers according to their personal likes and dislikes．
young as they are為后置定語和插入語，修飾students。accordingto their personal likes and dislikes為狀語，用法地道，并且遵循了英語句子“尾重”的規(guī)律。
4．…the students’evaluation is an indispensablepart of the teacher-evaluation．but should be designedscientifically，and be combined with other evaluationcriteria such s．．．
一個長句自成一段，主干結(jié)構(gòu)是me students’evaluation is…but should be…and be…，一氣呵成，且主動與被動相結(jié)合。such as引出后面的列舉。

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